Talk:Rudolph Moshammer

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I've tidied the 'His Bizarre Death' section, but could someone have another look? We really need sources including in there, espcecially since its about a current event. The JPS 21:15, 16 Jan 2005 (UTC)

I've tried to make the text a bit more English. However, I have left a few phrases I suspect are translated directly from German which I cannot think of how to rephrase: "base of existence", "Daisy was Moshammer's own treasure". Any ideas? --Garethhamilton 21:33, 16 Jan 2005 (UTC)

I had exactly the same idea, but when I edited the text Garethhamilton's changes did not show. Only after my edit did I find out that I had actually tried what someone else had already done. I do apologize although it's certainly not my fault. Wikipedia has been acting rather weird these past few days. <KF> 22:25, Jan 16, 2005 (UTC)

"The two garbs of Munich"? Really?

Doesn't "Zwietracht" mean, "discord", "disagreement"? It's the opposite of "Eintracht".

In the name of the band, it's a sort of pun, because "Zwietracht" also means "disharmony".

Further, the URL associated with the footnote, https://www.muenchnerzwietracht.de/, is a dead link. But Münchner Zwietracht does have a Facebook page:

https://www.facebook.com/muenchnerzwietracht

and there is no mention there that their name means, "The two garbs of Munich". I suspect that this translation is just a translation program's result, not a correct translation.

And finally, is this detail even relevant to the article, since the article is about Moshammer, not Münchner Zwietracht. There is an article dedicated to the band.

Best regards TheBaron0530 (talk) 16:34, 2 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]